Wednesday, May 27, 2020

If I were a tree in Autumn writing!

 

My learning shows how I can describe the fall/autumn season as if  were a tree during the fall/autumn season. We were learning to use describing words.  I found it easy to write about if I were a tree. I found it hard to not always use the same word in sentences. I really enjoyed using describing words. Next time I need to do more learning the first time instead of doing it over again to get more description, which is what I did. 

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora. My name is Eden and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really liked your writing about being a tree in autumn, I bet if trees could do they would be able to relate :>. I like how you put that you would smile to the kids when they play in the leaves because other trees probably wouldn't do that. Do you think you could’ve added more detail to your tree writing?

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  2. Thanks for your comment Eden! I bet if trees could talk they would!!😂 I wonder if they would smile?! Thanks for your feedback! I will do that next time!😊

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